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Grégoire.

El 03/11/13 16:51, Gregoire escribió:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the FSCONS booklet minus some information I didn't get, I'd really 
> appreciate it if someone could proofread it :-)
Some notes (sorry if repeated):
"Föreningen FSCONS" maybe people will understand it better as "FSCONS
Association"?
"If you have any concerns about yours or another participant's safety
please contact" the who is missing there.
"first-serve" should be first-served
"If you're looking for something more or different" I'd rewrite it as
"If you're looking for something more or prefer a different meal"
"airport buss" should be "airport bus"
"that take you directly" should be "taking you directly"

Regarding the text that's all I found.

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