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[Grégoire <gregoire AT fripost.org>]

On Sun, 2013-11-03 at 21:32 +0100, klondike wrote:
> Resent to org as I didn't reply-to list :( sorry for the double post
> Grégoire.
> 
> El 03/11/13 16:51, Gregoire escribió:
> > Hi all,
> >
> > Here is the FSCONS booklet minus some information I didn't get, I'd 
> > really appreciate it if someone could proofread it :-)
> Some notes (sorry if repeated):
> "Föreningen FSCONS" maybe people will understand it better as "FSCONS
> Association"?
I think I remember from last year that this was a conscious decision.
> "If you have any concerns about yours or another participant's safety
> please contact" the who is missing there.
Fixed.
> "first-serve" should be first-served
Fixed.
> "If you're looking for something more or different" I'd rewrite it as
> "If you're looking for something more or prefer a different meal"
This is probably a matter of style and I personally like this kind of
mixed coordinations :-D But I can change it if it bothers many people.
> "airport buss" should be "airport bus"
Fixed
> "that take you directly" should be "taking you directly"
Are you sure? It doesn't sound better to me, but my English is far from
perfect :-)

Thanks for your comments!

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