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[Andreas Skyman <skymandr AT fripost.org>]

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>> "If you have any concerns about yours or another participant's
>> safety please contact" the who is missing there.
> Fixed.

"yours" should be "your" or possibly "your own".


>> "that take you directly" should be "taking you directly"
> Are you sure? It doesn't sound better to me, but my English is far
> from perfect :-)

Some style guides advice against the "-ing" version of verbs. I have
no strong oppinions either way, but the way it is written now is
slightly wrong: it should be changed to "takes" or "will take", if you
wish to avoid "taking".

/A
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