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[Grégoire <gregoire AT fripost.org>]

On Mon, 2013-11-04 at 13:11 +0100, Andreas Skyman wrote:
> >> "If you have any concerns about yours or another participant's
> >> safety please contact" the who is missing there.
> > Fixed.
> 
> "yours" should be "your" or possibly "your own".
Fixed.
> 
> 
> >> "that take you directly" should be "taking you directly"
> > Are you sure? It doesn't sound better to me, but my English is far
> > from perfect :-)
> 
> Some style guides advice against the "-ing" version of verbs. I have
> no strong oppinions either way, but the way it is written now is
> slightly wrong: it should be changed to "takes" or "will take", if you
> wish to avoid "taking".
Changed to "takes"

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